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Author: Linda Hoyland

Title: Shadows

Rating: PG for mild horror

Theme: Anniversary special

Elements: Through shadows to the edge of night

Author's Notes: I could not resist revisiting my favourite scene in the book for this special challenge.

Summary:  Faramir is imprisoned in a realm of shadows

Word Count: 200

Disclaimer - These characters all belong to the estate of J.R.R. Tolkien. This story was written for pleasure and not for financial gain.



Shadows had never troubled Faramir before. They provided welcome respite from the summer’s heat or cover from the enemy’s watchful eye.

These shadows, though, were different. No mere figments of light and shade were they, but creatures filled with a malevolence that assailed his senses and filled the very air he breathed. They seeped into the very essence of his being and drained his strength, his joy, and his hope.

There was neither sun nor moon nor stars in this place, only creeping, all enshrouding shadows. They clung to him like cobwebs, leeching away his life force. The more he struggled, the more tightly they held him, their tendrils burning and freezing, cutting and pinching at his flesh.

His strength failed. He prepared to welcome death’s cold embrace.

“Faramir!”

A man’s voice, clear as a bell rang in his ears.

“Come, my friend! Walk no more in darkness!”

He held out his hand to Faramir. He grasped it. It was warm.

Light shone from a jewel upon the stranger’s brow and he appeared shining like the sun in springtime glory

Filled with love and awe, Faramir cried out, “My King!”

Then the shadows dissolved like mist before the resplendent sun.



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engarian
Jul. 27th, 2012 01:10 pm (UTC)
Nice choice of phrase to choose, Linda. And as always you worked such clear magic within your words. Nice!

- Erulisse (one L)
lindahoyland
Jul. 27th, 2012 05:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you, I'm pleased you liked this and am honoured you feel I work magic!
shirebound
Jul. 27th, 2012 01:32 pm (UTC)
Away shall fade! What a joyous moment.
lindahoyland
Jul. 27th, 2012 05:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you.
ellynn_ithilwen
Jul. 27th, 2012 03:20 pm (UTC)
I like your description of shadows - you really managed to make a dark atmosphere.
lindahoyland
Jul. 27th, 2012 05:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you, I tried hard to make the shadows menacing!
blslarner
Jul. 27th, 2012 03:24 pm (UTC)
Oh, how triumphant!
lindahoyland
Jul. 27th, 2012 05:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you.
dreamflower02
Jul. 29th, 2012 12:58 am (UTC)
What a wonderful version of that pivotal moment! Very evocative!
lindahoyland
Aug. 8th, 2012 01:27 am (UTC)
Thank you so much!
wtiger5
Aug. 8th, 2012 01:08 am (UTC)
This gave me goosebumps. I love seeing how different authors portray the same moment that Tolkien gives us such a tiny glimpse of.
lindahoyland
Aug. 8th, 2012 01:27 am (UTC)
Thank you. I love reading different interpretations of this special moment too.
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