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Poem: Mother's Love, by Talullah Red

Author: Talullah Red talullahred
Title: Mother's Love
Rating: G
Theme: Lyrical Love
Elements: Couplet
Author's Notes: I was so happy and relieved when dreamflower02 sent me a couplet! All I can say is: sorry, poetry is for the gifted! :D
Summary: Aredhel loves her boy.
Word Count: 16 words.



My Lómion, sweet boy, love of my life,
The best part of being your father’s wife.

Comments

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shirebound
Apr. 30th, 2015 01:48 pm (UTC)
Very nice. :)
talullahred
May. 1st, 2015 08:42 am (UTC)
Thanks! :)
kayleelupin
Apr. 30th, 2015 03:29 pm (UTC)
Sweet, and heartbreaking. Poor Aredhel.
talullahred
May. 1st, 2015 08:42 am (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 06:16 pm (UTC)
bittersweet - I like it very much!
talullahred
May. 1st, 2015 08:42 am (UTC)
Thank you! :) Very glad you liked it.
blslarner
Apr. 30th, 2015 07:26 pm (UTC)
At least there is reason to rejoice in the union.
talullahred
May. 1st, 2015 08:42 am (UTC)
Always a silver-lining. :) Thanks for commenting. :)
dreamflower02
Apr. 30th, 2015 08:23 pm (UTC)
Alas, the lament of many a single mother!

These two lines are exquisite.
talullahred
May. 1st, 2015 08:46 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. :)

(And thanks for throwing me an easy one. English is not my first language and that makes poetry especially difficult.)
lindahoyland
Apr. 30th, 2015 09:20 pm (UTC)
Very nice.
talullahred
May. 1st, 2015 08:46 am (UTC)
Thank you, Linda!
hhimring
May. 1st, 2015 07:18 am (UTC)
I fear it would have been like that for Aredhel--but at least she had her Lomion to love!
talullahred
May. 1st, 2015 08:45 am (UTC)
I see Aredhel as a free spirit. It must have been hard to leave one trap only to quickly find herself in another one. Thanks for commenting!
huinare
May. 3rd, 2015 12:31 am (UTC)
That says a whole lot in a short space!
talullahred
May. 3rd, 2015 06:48 am (UTC)
Thanks!
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