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nonetheless by Ness

Author: Ness
Title:
Rating: G
Theme: Lyrical Love
Elements: Haiku
Word Count: 13



nonetheless

captain, kinsman, friend
with you I stand, as ever
beyond this door, death

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( 18 comments — Leave a comment )
shirebound
Apr. 30th, 2015 01:49 pm (UTC)
Ooooh, that gives me chills. Very nice.
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 06:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
curiouswombat
Apr. 30th, 2015 02:46 pm (UTC)
Oh.... that is perfect.
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 06:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you....that one gave me the most trouble...it was the one that was important to me to turn out well.
kayleelupin
Apr. 30th, 2015 03:32 pm (UTC)
Poor Halbarad :( But so brave and faithful a kinsman will doubtless have been given a just reward by Eru.
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 06:08 pm (UTC)
I hope so! I am a bit cross at Tolkien for giving him such a good introduction and then just go "and, by the way, Halbarad died,too, no biggie, everyone just carry on"
blslarner
Apr. 30th, 2015 07:30 pm (UTC)
Halbarad? Well, well done! Still on guard even passed as he is from this one!
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 08:14 pm (UTC)
Yes, definitely Halbarad. Thanks!
dreamflower02
Apr. 30th, 2015 08:18 pm (UTC)
Poor Halbarad!
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 08:41 pm (UTC)
it is his fate but, knowing that, also his choice, I think
lindahoyland
Apr. 30th, 2015 08:18 pm (UTC)
Beautiful and poignant.
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 08:37 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
talullahred
May. 1st, 2015 08:36 am (UTC)
Wonderful and poignant. I love the format and read haiku quite a lot. I think you nailed it, the right amount of information for it to be lyrical and thought-provoking at the same time.
nessrealta
May. 1st, 2015 10:37 am (UTC)
Thank you! I don't usually do poetry at all but I think I've fallen quite in love with haiku....
hhimring
May. 2nd, 2015 11:18 am (UTC)
That works well--that first line summing up what Aragorn is to him and that final word to end on!
nessrealta
May. 2nd, 2015 12:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
huinare
May. 3rd, 2015 12:40 am (UTC)
Wow. This captures that moment perfectly. Very well done.
nessrealta
May. 3rd, 2015 08:41 am (UTC)
Thank you very much!
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