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Love Lost by Ness

Author: Ness
Title: Love Lost
Rating: G
Theme: Lyrical Love
Elements: Haiku
Author's Notes: Those are the first Haikus I've ever written so I don't know how they turned out - it was fun to try though!
Word Count: 11



Love Lost

Precious, my Precious
of gleaming golden beauty
reclaim you I will!

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shirebound
Apr. 30th, 2015 01:49 pm (UTC)
Well done! You say much with little.
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 05:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Poetry is not my forté (nor do I usually read much poetry) but I found that I really like Haikus.
curiouswombat
Apr. 30th, 2015 02:45 pm (UTC)
A perfect haiku - I lovesss it...
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 05:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
kayleelupin
Apr. 30th, 2015 03:30 pm (UTC)
Speaks like Yoda, Gollum does. *snickers* Sorry, I can't help always thinking that. :) But this sums up Gollum nicely! Well done!
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 06:01 pm (UTC)
hehe! That one just popped right into my head, I had fun with this! *thinks of Yoda!Gollum sitting in his cave carving this haiku into a slimy rock*
blslarner
Apr. 30th, 2015 07:27 pm (UTC)
Perfectly wrought!
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 08:09 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
dreamflower02
Apr. 30th, 2015 08:22 pm (UTC)
Oh Gollum!

This really captures his obsession.
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 08:43 pm (UTC)
this kind of obsessive/possessive love was fun to write!
lindahoyland
Apr. 30th, 2015 09:20 pm (UTC)
So very Gollum!
nessrealta
Apr. 30th, 2015 10:18 pm (UTC)
hee, I hope so! :-)
talullahred
May. 1st, 2015 08:41 am (UTC)
Well done!
nessrealta
May. 1st, 2015 10:41 am (UTC)
Thank you!
hhimring
May. 2nd, 2015 11:23 am (UTC)
This could be applied to others than Gollum, sadly...
nessrealta
May. 2nd, 2015 01:05 pm (UTC)
Yes...
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