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Last Will and Testament - by Larner

Author: Larner
Title: Last Will and Testament
Theme: Fixing the movies
Elements: Larkspur
Rating: PG

Summary: For the movies, Sam, Merry, and Pippin accompany Gandalf, Frodo, and Bilbo to the Grey Havens, believing they are merely seeing Bilbo leaving with the Elves. They are surprised to learn Gandalf and Frodo are going as well. The movies end with Sam returning to Rosie, Elanor, and Frodo-lad in Number 3, Bagshot Row.

So, how do we reconcile this with book-verse, and how does Sam come to realize he is now Frodo's heir, and that he inherits Bag End as well as everything else? How does he know what Frodo wishes for him?

Beta by RiverOtter.
Word Count: 1259



Last Will and Testament


Sam watched the grey ship disappear into the sunset, clutching the volume his Master had given him to his chest. At last as full dark took them and he could see no more he turned back to join Merry and Pippin, who waited for him near the archway that marked the borders of the Elven haven.

Merry held Bill’s reins for him, while Pippin held those of Frodo’s Strider. “Are you all right, Sam?” Merry asked as he surrendered the reins to the gardener.

“I suppose as I am,” Sam replied, handing the book to Merry so he could bring out a handkerchief and wipe his eyes. “I certainly wasn’t prepared for--for that; not for him to leave us that way.”

“None of us were,” Pippin responded with a glance over his shoulder. “I thought we were only coming to see Cousin Bilbo leave. And now they’ve all gone--Bilbo, Elrond, Gandalf, the Lady, and--and Frodo!” He scrubbed at his eyes with his sleeve. In the growing starlight and the glimmer of torches from the quayside Sam could see the younger Hobbit’s chin tremble.

Merry nodded stiffly.

Once Sam was swung up into Bill’s saddle Merry handed up the leather-bound book, and having no better way to carry it, Sam tucked it under his arm as he led the way eastward once more, back toward the borders of the Shire and home. They didn’t ride particularly far that evening, stopping to camp about an hour after they’d left Mithlond.

“We should’ve stayed there by the Havens, perhaps,” Sam suggested as he dismounted stiffly.

Merry cast a look back over his shoulder, the pain of loss easy to see in his eyes. “I couldn’t have done so,” he said after a moment as he slid off his pony. “Not with the sound of the Sea in my ears.” He watched Pippin alight. “Shall you find some wood or should I?” he asked his friend and cousin.

“I will, if you and Sam will see to the ponies.”

“That we can do,” Sam said as he laid the book on a fallen tree, and in moments the three of them were each busy preparing for the night.

Pippin returned with a goodly load of wood and with a spike of larkspur behind his ear. “There’s a lovely meadow over that way,” he said, indicating the way he’d come with a nod of his head. “Lots of flowers. Frodo would love it. We could perhaps stake out the ponies so they could graze.”

“If’n we keep them well away from the larkspur,” Sam grunted.

At last they had all arranged for the night, and with tin mugs filled with freshly brewed tea warming their hands, they gathered about their campfire. “I can’t believe he’s gone,” Pippin murmured into his cup.

Merry grunted wordlessly, obviously still heart-sore.

Sam took a sip as he automatically glanced about their camp as if making certain all was in order, then paused as his attention was caught by the red book Frodo had entrusted to him. He set the mug on the tree and took the book in both hands, rubbing his thumbs over the cover, exploring the texture of the leather. “He showed me this, there just afore we left Bag End,” he said.

“That’s the book he promised to write for Bilbo of our adventures?” Merry asked. At Sam’s nod he held out his hand. “May I see it?”

After a moment’s pause Sam complied. As Merry shifted it so as to better open it, however, a thick envelope slid out from just inside its cover and fell to the ground. Immediately the Brandybuck closed the volume and bent down to retrieve the fallen envelope. “What’s this?”

Pippin straightened, curiosity winning out over his grief. “There was a letter inside the book? Who is it addressed to?”

Merry angled it so he could read the inscription by the light of the campfire. “It’s more than just a letter, and it’s intended for Sam,” he said. “Well, that makes sense as he gave the book to you, Sam.” He handed it to the gardener. “It’s for you to open it, then.”

Sam fetched his cup as he sank down on the ground by the fire. He took another swallow before setting it on one of the stones set to mark out their firepit, and turned the envelope in his hand. “To Samwise Gamgee,” he read before turning it to slip his thumbnail under the wax seal. The others were sinking down to flank him, intent on seeing what it was that Frodo might have left to his faithful companion.

There was a letter and a thicker bundle of papers that Sam shook out of the envelope. He took the single page first, running his eyes over the familiar, graceful script. “To my dear Sam,” he began, then paused. When he resumed reading aloud his voice was filled with mixed grief and wonder.

I have been most unfair to you, not telling you I am leaving, also. But some wounds have gone too deep, have taken hold. I can no longer find rest within the Shire or Bag End. It is time to go on. Yes, the Shire has been saved, but not for me and certainly not by me.

I would have you know that the offer made me is also being made to you. Those who told me that the ship on which I will sail is the “Last Ship” were, apparently, exaggerating the situation. Gandalf has assured me that Lord Círdan intends to remain within Middle Earth, making certain that all Elves who wish to return to Aman will find ships appropriate to the journey awaiting them when the time comes for each to sail; and you may sail on any of these. You too were a Ringbearer. I pray, however, that you remain in Middle Earth and know the fulfillment you are intended to know.

Do not be sad, Sam. You were meant to be well and whole, for many years. There is so much for you enjoy, and to be, and to do.

I’d hoped to save the Shire, and it was saved--but as I said, not for me. It must often be so, that some must give up what they love that others might keep it. But I have made you my heir, and all that I had or might have had, all that I was or might have been, all that I knew or might have known, I leave to you. And also you have Rose and Elanor; and Frodo-lad will come, and Rosie-lass, and Merry, and Goldilocks, and Pippin; and perhaps more that I cannot see. And your hands and your wits....


As Sam read, the others found themselves weeping once more, and as much in relief as in grief for Frodo’s going.

It was Pippin who finally picked up the bundle of papers and began examining them, at last smiling through his tears. “What he said about making you his heir, Sam--it’s true! He did! This is his will. And this--” he separated out a second bundle carefully fastened together, “--this is the deed to Bag End.” He looked up to meet Sam’s swimming eyes. “He’s made it out to you and to Rosie. You and Rosie are now Master and Mistress of Bag End and the Hill.”

His hand shaking, Sam gave over the letter to Merry as he reached to take and wonder at the deed.

Comments

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nancylea57
May. 18th, 2009 11:14 pm (UTC)
very nice touch on the story. to have him get this information while he'll have time to form his questions and get answers from the heirs of the ultimate authority in Shire.
blslarner
May. 19th, 2009 05:53 am (UTC)
So glad you like the timing, Nancy. Thank you!
dreamflower02
May. 18th, 2009 11:17 pm (UTC)
Oh, I like this! And I can imagine the scene even further, as Sam returns and lets Rose know that they will be moving up the hill. Very touching, and very realistic.
blslarner
May. 19th, 2009 05:55 am (UTC)
I simply never understood why they didn't somehow indicate that Frodo had made Sam and Rosie housemates with himself! Am so glad you found it realistic, Dreamflower. Thank you so!
shirebound
May. 18th, 2009 11:41 pm (UTC)
I would have you know that the offer made me is also being made to you. Those who told me that the ship on which I will sail is the “Last Ship” were, apparently, exaggerating the situation. Gandalf has assured me that Lord Círdan intends to remain within Middle Earth, making certain that all Elves who wish to return to Aman will find ships appropriate to the journey awaiting them when the time comes for each to sail; and you may sail on any of these.

Darn right! Thank you for fixing this. *beams*
blslarner
May. 19th, 2009 05:57 am (UTC)
Glad to oblige, Shirebound. I hated what was left out in the movies here, although from a dramatist's sense I can sort of understand why....
ex_lbilover
May. 18th, 2009 11:59 pm (UTC)
Those who told me that the ship on which I will sail is the “Last Ship” were, apparently, exaggerating the situation.
That certainly healed a wound the movie left in my heart. Thank you! I'm happy to know what happened to Bag End, as well. I hated that that was left unresolved!
blslarner
May. 19th, 2009 05:59 am (UTC)
Am glad this apparently made several folk feel that these particular holes in the movie were finally closed. I felt the lack of much of this material in the films!
periantari
May. 19th, 2009 02:24 am (UTC)
How touching and sad...that letter was written so poignantly. I love post-Havens scenes like these where the three hobbits are together thinking about Frodo. Beautiful piece. =)
blslarner
May. 19th, 2009 06:03 am (UTC)
So glad you do, Periantari. I tried to work in much of what was said there as they joined the Elves in book-verse, so if it poignant it's due to the Master's own writing! And I, too, love thinking of that retrurn trip as Sam, Merry, and Pippin came to terms with Frodo's departure. Thank you so!
labourslamp
May. 19th, 2009 06:57 pm (UTC)
This was great because it dealt with two large problems at once--and brought back Frodo's foresight and book-verse lines. Glad to see Bag End--and Sam's place on ship--back in their rightful places.
blslarner
May. 20th, 2009 01:58 am (UTC)
The lines Frodo utters to Sam when they meet the Elves are among the most poignant in the entire work, and ought not to have been left out! I'm proud to have found a way to reintroduce them. And although the books deliberately leave it vague as to whether or not Sam truly follows Frodo westward, I prefer to think that in this case he is more straightforward. And what happens to Bag End when Sam returns to Number 3 in the movies is a question that needs answering!

Glad to oblige!
kgreen20
Sep. 9th, 2013 05:27 pm (UTC)
I love how you filled in this gap, too. Thank you! Nice job.

Just one thing. In the book, Frodo-lad's conception and birth still lay in the future, but in the movie, he had already been born. He was a baby when Sam returned from the Grey Havens, and Elanor was old enough to run into his arms. In addition, Frodo also said, "You will not always be torn in two" and "Your part of the story will go on." In fact, this is what he is quoted as saying in the final scene:

"My dear Sam, you cannot always be torn in two. You will have to be one and whole for many years. You have so much to enjoy and to be and to do. Your part in the story will go on."

I have copied and pasted your story onto a Word document, to save on my computer. Please, could I insert the missing sentences, as well as the mention of Frodo-lad as already being there, into Frodo's letter, within my copy of your story?


Edited at 2013-09-09 05:45 pm (UTC)
blslarner
Sep. 10th, 2013 05:21 am (UTC)
Thank you so, Kgreen. Here I noted above that Sam returned home to Rosie, Elanor, and Frodo-lad, but in quoting Frodo's speech to Sam from the book I put Frodo-lad into the future, didn't I? Heh! And neither I nor RiverOtter caught that!

Yes, feel free to insert those sentences into the letter, those from the movie's ending and from what Frodo says in the overlay to that final scene as Sam returns to Number Three. And thank you so for your comments.
kgreen20
Sep. 10th, 2013 03:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I have done just that. I have also taken the liberty of removing the word, "To," from the letter's salutation in my copy of your story, because I don't believe that Frodo would have begun the salutation with that word. In fact, in the movie, he was not quoted as using that word when he used that phrase. Instead, I rephrased the salutation as, "My dear Sam," which is what Frodo was quoted as saying in the movie (presumably in a letter that he left for Sam, as you have surmised, since he did not say all that stuff when he was saying good-bye to his cousins and Sam at the Grey Havens).

I'd love to see this story posted on Fanfiction.net!


Edited at 2013-09-10 06:36 pm (UTC)
blslarner
Sep. 13th, 2013 12:29 am (UTC)
This story is posted on FanFiction.net as well as at StoriesOfArda, Many Paths to Tread, Tolkien FanFiction, and the Henneth Annun Story Archive. On FF.n, SoA, and TFF it is posted in my "Might Have Beens" collection, while at MPTT and HASA it is posted individually, those two sites being set up differently than the other archives.

Thank you again for expressing your appreciation for the story. There have been several changes PJ made that I feel ought to have been done more closely to the Master's own work.
kgreen20
Sep. 13th, 2013 02:21 am (UTC)
OK, I found "Might Have Beens" in Fanfiction.net and Stories of Arda, and I found "Last Will and Testament" by itself in Many Paths to Tread. Thanks!

BTW, I would love to have the links to Tolkien Fanfiction and the Henneth Annun Story Archive. I've never seen either Web site.

I agree with you about the changes Peter Jackson made.
blslarner
Sep. 13th, 2013 03:21 am (UTC)
Henneth Annun is http://www.henneth-annun.net/

TFF is http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/

These are the five archives I currently post to. There are a lot more archives that accept Tolkien Fanfiction besides these, but I sometimes feel stretched making certain that I get things posted to just these five. On SoA, FanFiction.net, and TFF I tend to post most of my short stories into collections, and once I have a hundred stories in a single collection I'll close it up and start another collection. A few are posted alone, but they tend to be the exception. Not everything I've written is posted to Many Paths to Tread as yet, as it was begun just a few years ago. When I have time and remember to, I'll bring over a few more that are posted on my other sites to MPTT. I used to post on a site called West of the Moon, but the archive owner could no longer keep it up, so I believe that site is now off the net, as is The Last Ship.

HASA has been around for quite some time, and is one of the first I joined, along with FF.n. I think I joined SoA and TFF about the same time. Each has its own strengths and weaknesses.
kgreen20
Sep. 13th, 2013 03:31 am (UTC)
Thanks! I've bookmarked the links.
kgreen20
Nov. 17th, 2013 04:34 am (UTC)
It's me again. =) I've just sent a PM to your account on Fanfiction.net.
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