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Author: Kaylee Arafinwiel
Title: Hot Buns in the Morning
Rating: G
Theme: Dialogue challenge
Elements: a baker, a village, a brick and the word warm
Warning: Potential threat of discipline though not actually carried out.
Summary: The heirs of Elessar and his Steward run amok before dawn. Catastrophe ensues.
Word Count: 217

Hot Buns in the Morning


***

Crash!

"Who threw that brick?"

It wasn't me it wasn't me it wasn't me...yes it was, but I didn't mean to...

"Eldarion Elessarion!"

Ai...

"Yes, Master Cemendur."

His eyes are staring me through...those blue eyes like Uncle Legolas, so clear and knowing...

"What did you think you were doing, young prince?"

I hate it how he seems to know everything.

"I was just...er...well, you see, it was...um..."

"I am waiting, my scapegrace princeling."

At least he doesn't say 'naughty'. Not that this is much better. I'm twelve, why must he look at me that way!

"Well...you see, Master Cemendur, I was...running."

"Running. I can see that. You were running from whom? To where?"

"Just....Elboron was chasing me through the village because we wanted to be the first to get the buns warm from the oven. And we were playing with the brick."
Now I feel so foolish.

"Buns warm from the oven. Well, if hot buns are the order of the day for you and your gwador, I can soon see that delivered."

I do not like that look, not at all.

"Do not stand there with your mouth agape, Prince Elboron. It was most unseemly of you to stand back and let your gwador tell the tale. Come inside, both of you."

We're doomed.

The end.

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kayleelupin
Nov. 24th, 2009 06:31 am (UTC)
Thanks, mews! I really appreciate it! *grin* I think Aragorn and Faramir would despair of their sons' sense sometimes.

Kaylee Arafinwiel
addie71
Nov. 23rd, 2009 06:43 pm (UTC)
Ah, youth! How could these two not get into trouble? *g*
kayleelupin
Nov. 24th, 2009 06:28 am (UTC)
lol, you're right addie! I think these two are just fated for trouble. *g*

Thanks for reading!

Kaylee Arafinwiel
labourslamp
Nov. 24th, 2009 03:10 am (UTC)
Oops! *grin*

Glad to see that these two 1). are in a situation carefree enough that they can try to get away with these sorts of shenanigans, and 2). will never get away with it.
kayleelupin
Nov. 24th, 2009 06:30 am (UTC)
labourslamp,

Oops indeed *snicker*

"...1). are in a situation carefree enough that they can try to get away with these sorts of shenanigans, and 2). will never get away with it."

yep, I think that just about sums it up! Thanks so much!

Kaylee Arafinwiel
blslarner
Nov. 28th, 2009 10:20 pm (UTC)
The two of them are indeed in the hotseat now! Heh! Now, to see what will be done about the situation. And I am so proud of Eldarion here, knowing he must admit his own responsibility!
pearltook1
Nov. 29th, 2009 01:50 am (UTC)
Boys will be boys no matter what their lineage. :-) Cute story Kaylee!
wendwriter
Nov. 29th, 2009 06:14 pm (UTC)
Ah, such naughtiness - and such a fun read!

Scapegrace princeling. Such a cool epithet!
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