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Bilbo's Last Gift, by Nautika

Bilbo's Last Song by nautika

Author: nautika

Title: Bilbo's Last Gift

Rating: K+

Theme: 010 january potluck challenge

Elements: Though there had been cool days earlier in the week, this day had turned very nearly as bright and warm as summer.(from September 22 challenge)

Author's Notes: This was the first story I started for the LOTRG challenge. The song mentioned is "Bilbo's Song".

Summary: In The Return of the King, Tolkien writes "And the ship went out into the High Sea and passed on into the West". Though no one knows the full story of what followed, here is my take on one special day.

Word Count: 497



Bilbo's Last Gift

Frodo heard a step behind him, but didn’t bother turning around.

“Frodo, are you well?” Frodo waited until Gandalf eased down onto the boulder next to Frodo and straightened his robes before answering.

“Yes, Gandalf, I’m well. I’m just waiting for the stars.” Though there had been cool days earlier in the week, this day had turned very nearly as bright and warm as summer. Frodo would be glad for the cool of the evening.

“Your birthday will be difficult without him.”

“It will be the first time since I was a tween that I won't drink to his health. I was lucky to have him as long as I did, but I had hoped for one birthday together here in Aman.”

“He would have liked that, as well.”

Frodo smiled. “He gave such wonderful parties. I think I preferred the ones at Bag End to the one at the Party Tree, though. At Bag End, he was still there when the party was over.”

“You have friends here, Frodo, who would be honored to spend the day with you tomorrow.”

“I think I’d rather spend this one alone, Gandalf. I’ve been so busy caring for Bilbo that I haven’t any gifts to give, and it wouldn’t be a Baggin’s Birthday without gifts.” Frodo heard the tremble in his voice and paused to collect himself. When he spoke again, he knew his voice was firm. “I’m going to stay home and look over some more of his notes, and think about our parties together…and apart. Pippin, Merry, Fatty and Folco celebrated with me the night before I left Bag End with … the Ring. We sang and talked of mischief we'd made over the years. We spent some time under the stars that night, too."

"They will be thinking of you tomorrow, I am certain."

Frodo knew Gandalf meant well, but it just made him feel worse to be reminded that friends and family were thinking of him when they were beyond his reach. "I'll be fine, Gandalf. Truly. We knew it was coming, and everyone has been very kind. Next year, we'll celebrate in true Hobbit fashion."

"If you wish to be alone, I'll leave you then. You know where to find me if you change your mind."

"Thank you." As Gandalf prepared to stand, Frodo put a hand over one of the wizard's. "I know you and Bilbo were friends for a long time, Gandalf. It helps to know you miss him, too." Kind eyes met his, and Frodo thought he saw a sheen in them before Gandalf nodded and rose.

He waited until Gandalf was out of sight, but not necessarily out of hearing range, and looked toward the sky. The light of day was fading as he began to sing a portion of Bilbo's last gift to him.

'Lands there are
To West of West
Where night is quiet
And sleep is rest.'

"Sleep well, my dear Bilbo."

~The End~

Comments

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shirebound
Feb. 3rd, 2010 08:59 pm (UTC)
That's a truly lovely story. Frodo's heart is so big, he can acknowledge Gandalf's grief as well as his own.
ceshaughnessy
Feb. 3rd, 2010 08:59 pm (UTC)
This was very sad and touching and I enjoyed it very much!
addie71
Feb. 3rd, 2010 10:35 pm (UTC)
So sad and beautiful.
dreamflower02
Feb. 3rd, 2010 10:59 pm (UTC)
Very sad and touching, but also I could very much feel Bilbo's influence--even though he was gone. Gandalf and Frodo are so very much in character here.
wendwriter
Feb. 3rd, 2010 11:58 pm (UTC)
That was both beautiful and sad. Your writing is so vivid I could almost see it happening in front of me. :D
traveller19
Feb. 4th, 2010 05:13 am (UTC)
*Sobs!* Beautiful!!! And Frodo is so selfless, thinking of how much grief Gandalf feels over Bilbo, too. Very, very well done.
someplacetobe
Feb. 4th, 2010 09:38 am (UTC)
This was very nicely done - the kindness Frodo shared with Gandalf by reciting the last gift with Gandalf not necessarily out of earshot yet was, I think, in character for Frodo and, for me, showed that quite well.
meneleth
Feb. 4th, 2010 02:35 pm (UTC)
Very sweet. Thanks for sharing.
lindahoyland
Feb. 5th, 2010 06:11 am (UTC)
A very touching story.
nautika3
Feb. 11th, 2010 02:07 am (UTC)
Thanks to everyone who commented! It is much appreciated.
blslarner
Feb. 16th, 2010 03:31 am (UTC)
Am so glad this is here to find! Beautiful! And so true to both Bilbo and Frodo!
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