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Gollum's Scheme by WendWriter


Author: WendWriter


Title: Gollum's Scheme


Rating: T


Theme: Mad As A March Hare


Element: Weather: Windy


Author's Notes: “Not through lack of watchfulness,” said Legolas, “but perhaps through over-kindliness. And we fear that the prisoner had aid from others...”


Summary: How did Gollum contrive to escape from the Elves?


Word Count: 545


 

 

 

 

Gollum's Scheme

 

It was dark in the dungeons of the Elvenking, yesss, and there were plenty of ratses and spiderses to eat, precious, but the silence in there gave us no peace. It was our birthday present, and the thief Baggins stole it from us. He cheated at riddles, he did, and stole the Precious. Gollum! We hates it forever! He lives in  the Shire, somewhere in the hills, and we'll find him, precious, and wring his neck!

 

Cruel Man! He hunted us down, chased us to the marshes in the Black Land where the Dark Lord lives in the tall tower. They tortured us, precious. Stretched us on a rack, they did, and whipped us, then set us free. We told him what he wanted to know. Baggins. Shire. The Dark Lord wants the Precious, but we had to tell him where it was to make them stop hurting us.

 

Then he let us go. It was windy that day, so we didn't hear the Man come sneaking up on us. We were in the marshes, hunting for fish, and found a big silvery one lying on a tussock. It looked tasssty, precious, and we were hungry. Gollum! We went to get it, but the Man jumped out and seized us! Gollum! Gollum! We bit him, we did, and he carried us all the way to the Elveses stronghold in a sack. We were in it for months. Gollum! Then he gave us to the Elveses and they put us in the dungeons. We'll get him for that, precious. Put him in a sack and throw him in a dungeon!

 

We had to get out. Something in the Elveses's realm stops the voice of the Precious. Keeps it out. Gollum! Gollum! We wants it. We needs it. The Precious calls to us. Speaks to us. We loves it. Gollum! We had to get out of there and get it back before the Dark Lord did. We had a plan.

 

We stopped eating the food they brought us, and lay still for hours at a time. Sometimes we would scream and rave, climb up the bars and bash our head off them, then drop to the floor and rock back and forth. It worked. They said they were driving us mad by keeping us confined, and brought us outside to feel the wind on our face and see the stars. They love the stars.

 

They let us climb the trees, precious. Up in the high branches, we met a crow who knows the Orcses who live in the Misty Mountains. He told us he could get them to free us. Gollum! We told him we would be ready for them. A day or so later, they came while we were eating baby birds from a nest near the top of a tree with silvery bark. They killed them, precious. The Elveses lay dead or dying on the ground, and we went with the Orcses. They took some of the Elveses along with them as prisoners. Gollum! Elf flesh is tender, yesss, and the Orcses eat them sometimes.

 

Now we are free. We can hear the song of the Precious. We will take it back from the Baggins and it will be ours again.

 

 

The End.



Comments

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shirebound
Mar. 16th, 2010 12:01 am (UTC)
Very clever. You've filled in this gap nicely.
dreamflower02
Mar. 16th, 2010 01:09 am (UTC)
A very well-done, and very creepy and plausible Gollum! I can see this happening in this way.
leianora
Mar. 16th, 2010 03:26 am (UTC)
The fact that he actually premeditated his escape by pretending to go mad gives me chills. I do find myself wondering, though, why did the orcs not eat him, too? Or better yet, did he just wait until the orcs were distracted and distracting the elves, and then escape on his own? Either way, this is an excellent gap-filler!
nautika3
Mar. 16th, 2010 04:36 am (UTC)
This gives me chills!
lindahoyland
Mar. 16th, 2010 06:42 am (UTC)
A very chilling insight into Gollum's mind.
claudia603
Mar. 16th, 2010 12:20 pm (UTC)
oooh, your Gollum voice is very chilling! Nice job!
blslarner
Mar. 16th, 2010 04:50 pm (UTC)
Ooh--so very likely! I can see Gollum doing just this--trading on the compassion of the Elves! And the thought of the Elves taken prisoner to be dinner on the hoof....

(Swallows down bile!)
telstar_gold
Mar. 16th, 2010 08:44 pm (UTC)
You did a great job of getting inside Gollum's head here! *shudders*
foxrafer
Mar. 18th, 2010 01:39 pm (UTC)
Great voice and great addition to the story.
wormwood_7
Mar. 18th, 2010 01:49 pm (UTC)
You have really captured Gollum's voice here. Very chilling.
mrowe
Mar. 24th, 2010 02:51 pm (UTC)
Ooh, nasty Gollum... well done.
someplacetobe
Mar. 30th, 2010 09:16 am (UTC)
... what a nice surprise I found in my bookmarks! (I’d bookmarked this to read later when I was feeling more able at the time these were posted and, I confess shamefacedly, I forgot until today.)

I could picture this very very clearly and hear it completely as Gollum would have said it, saw it from his point of view which the story was doing but did it so well.

Very nicely done! Thank you for sharing this.
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